Brazil Writing

Lost in Brazil

WALT organise our ideas into paragraphs.

Your writing task: You are in a team competing in the Amazing Race. You have just landed in Rio de Janeiro and you are lost! You have found a person to help you however they don’t speak English! Write to them so they can translate it into Portuguese.

PLAN:

Introduction	Who are you? lyall Where are you from? Nz  Why are you in Brasilia? Rio de janeiro  How are you feeling? Im lost
Body	Who are you travelling with? My friend
Body	How long are you staying and where are you staying? At a house
Body	Where are you trying to go? The gues statute
Body	What are you needing help with? To get there
Conclusion	What is the purpose of this note? Thanks idk

START WRITING:

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One day when i joined the amazing race i went to Brazil at rio de janeiro to get to the statue but i don't know where to go. I have been trying to tell people but they ignore me. I am lost. My friend is also lost so we rented a house. When we got there we looked on our phones where to go.

We just need to look for a bus to travel to the statue because we don't have a car. But we saw no bus. So we just went to bed. When we woke up I looked outside and saw a bus quickly lets go but as we got to the bus stop it drove away.

I was so scared we had no money to go back to NZ and i don't know how to speak portagesse but my friend does. he went outside and asked olá estamos perdidos no brasil podemos ter algum dinheiro   for the bus then finley someone gave us money. I was so happy it was just enough for two people on the bus. 

We finally got on and went to the statue. We met someone there to give us enough money to go back to NZ we were the second team to make it and we got $5000 

     

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